Rather than lecturing, I asked creative writing
students on the second day of my sophomore level poetry class to define some of the key
characteristics of poetic writing. At first, a few timid hands rose as basic qualities of
poetry, such as rhyme, meter, and metaphor, were identified. While students spoke, I
compiled a list of characteristics on the chalkboard, occasionally asking for
clarification and further explanation when students mentioned such concepts as "a
heightened awareness" or "powerful language."
As the discussion went on, students soon dispensed with
hand-raising in favor of a more spontaneous dialogue about the various distinguishing
features of a given poetic quality and the inevitable interrelationships of terms and
concepts. We had an excellent discussion about what poetic writing entails. Our talk led
to a tangential discussion of numerous artistic endeavors. I hadn't planned to discuss
other art forms yet, but the student-generated analysis greatly enhanced our understanding
of the form of art we were about to practice. Ironically, I had brought in a number of
dictionary definitions (in case students were stumped by my question) that we then checked
against the list of characteristics we had "discovered." We found most key
features of the pre-fabricated definitions mentioned in our own
defining characteristics and were able to laugh at some of the more redundant,
circular dictionary definitions.
Analysis: The students are asked to analyze
what constitutes poetic writing by listing the characteristics of the genre and the
interrelations of those artistic qualities.
Synthesis: By generating a list of specific
characteristics of poetry, the students begin to create a critical vocabulary with which
to critique their own and other writers' poetry.
Evaluation: Ongoing evaluation of
poetry throughout the semester (and beyond) is better facilitated by using some agreed
upon critical characteristics instead of the "I liked it (or not)" ilk of
responses to works of art. Workshop poems can then be evaluated for their effective or
ineffective use of poetic qualities.
Creativity: Student writers are free to use
the characteristics in various combinations to compose their own poems and poems that
mimic another writer's form or content. Each new group of writing students is
allowed and encouraged to define its poetics on its own terms (although a predictable
range of critical terms are sure to arise). This shows there isn't one fixed set of
artistic criteria used to evaluate poetry, and it shows the flexibility inherent in
language.
Decision Making: Students can then write
with a more conscious set of poetic tools, deciding which poetic features to use, when to
use them, and how to judge their results.
Hypothesizing/Predicting: Students better
understand the value of writing within the constrictions of established poetic forms,
knowing their poems will, at the very least, display poetic qualities whether they are
ultimately deemed successful poems or not.
Applications: Besides deriving criteria for
evaluating poetic works, students can apply many of the qualities and characteristics in a
broader sense to other forms of art, and can understand the need for a critical vocabulary
in order to form a well-reasoned judgment of any work of art.
Relevance: Students get involved in critical
thinking almost effortlessly, and they realize that they do know quite a bit about the
world of art even if they've never tried a particular form before. They see the need
to think critically and creatively in order to create effective works of art.
Learning Style: The activity is largely
auditory and visual. Though I don't require it, most students copy the list as we
make it on the board, so the kinesthetic element of writing is also involved.
Real-life: The critical approach to art
involved in this activity is readily useable in any artistic activities that these
students may encounter, from critiquing a film they see to evaluating an art exhibit or
even a meal in a restaurant. Students develop a clearer sense of aesthetic judgement when
they have to define their evaluative criteria before they evaluate or create a work of
art.
Adaptability: Asking the question,
"What are the characteristics of (poetry, pottery, sculpture, lithography,
etc.)?" can generate useful framing discussions if asked about biology, psychology,
geometry, history, and so on. Extending the inquiry into other humanities and the sciences
helps students understand each field's purviews, patterns, and values better. With a
clearer vision of the big picture, any area of study is easier to grasp and to master.